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    Default PMD Victory Fire RELAUNCH

    New thread, because whole new comic, basically. Here we go again.

    First off I want to thank the Pokefarm users for putting up with me this long LOL. If you were following the original thread, you may be wondering why we're starting the comic over. To that I would say: it was always intended to be a beta version. Night and I have both written fanfiction, but we'd never tackled a comic. So, we decided we'd do a trial run first.

    And you guys said a lot of really useful stuff. Night and I talked over every comment in the thread and noticed areas where people were jumping to strange conclusions due to poor storytelling on our part. I have to say the funniest one was when someone suggested Tyranitar left Jen the apple! Hopefully everything will be clearer now.

    I would like to keep posting VF here on Pokefarm as I did before, but to save on our site's bandwidth I'd like to just link to the Smackjeeves account pages rather than inlining everything. I hope this is all right.

    New pages will be posted singly on Tuesdays and Fridays, but to start off we've got a little prologue.


    Page 0: This is a story from long ago
    Page 1: Shadows and visions
    Page 2: Shadows and visions cont.
    Page 3: Shadows and visions cont.
    Page 4: VF Book 1/12: The Girl and the Ghost
    Page 5
    Page 6
    Page 7
    Page 8: Trip
    Page 9: That sound
    Page 10: Cornered
    Page 11: Roused
    Page 12: Converging
    Page 13: Bad Dream
    Page 14: Purity
    Page 15: Celebi's Fear
    Page 16: Guard Your Dreams
    Page 17: Day Begins
    Page 18: Resolution Reached
    Last edited by Maggyo; 04-20-2012 at 05:22 PM.
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    I like this. I like this very much.
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    Great start, Maggyo! I'll be following this as more of it comes

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    Wow! i love that Victini is the bad guy, and the pic of Gengar, O.o Awesomeness!
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    Thanks for the comments. I'm working on page 25 now and I personally really like the way things are going now. I should mention that the biggest change is that Jen is not from "our world" any more. Bit of trivia: This story was originally (years ago) conceived as a parody of the then-common "author gets pulled into pokemon game" fanfics, most of which were terrible and deserving of mockery. We shelved it at the time, but dug it up again last summer because we thought there was potential in it for a serious story.

    Anyway I don't want to spam up this thread too much right now so I'll stop talking.
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    There is definitely potential in this one...and it seems you have made the intentions of the characters and the plot more apparent from the last book...and I find the reversal of personas personally appealing...can't wait to read more!
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    Page 5 added, courtesy note as it's only a scene-setter.
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    Page 6 added.
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    Page 7 added, 'cuz it's Tuesday baby
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    Hm, this is intriguing. It's quite different to the original,as it seems this is a planned attack. But then, it seemed planned later on in the original.

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